Saturday, June 22, 2024

Cold desert rain (short story) (Part 1 of 4)

 Cold desert-rain!

 

A thunder-echo cacophony of resounding reverberations caused by huge raindrops hammered the overhead rock outcropping illuminated in yellow-white lightning jags as the night time desert storm raged. U.S. Army infantry Sergeant Heather McGonahue hunkered tightly against the back of the huge desert rock squinting against the onslaught of the deluge. She involuntarily shivered against the chill wishing for some of the previous afternoon heat which she had so derisively cursed between gulps of water in an effort to replenish fluids and quench her thirst.

Damn! The bad luck!” She whispered against the rain chill. “Never rains when you need it! Kind of like a cop being around when you need one.” Imperceptibly, she shook her head.

She involuntarily laughed at her little joke immediately reprimanding herself for always “seeing the humor in any situation.” This predicament was anything but “humorous”. In fact, she reminded herself, again, her very survival demanded clear thinking and proper decisions to make it through this horrendous challenge. She would rely on her military training to persevere.

Heather shook her head at the dichotomy, desert sand had an unpleasant personality trait so different than she had experienced along the Gulf beach near her childhood home in Fort Myers.

Ocean sand was firm to the feet and always cool from being caressed by the constant surf resulting a flat, smooth surface; desert sand was loose and unstable, often “marching’ as the dunes traversed its host desert on constant, often wild, winds which sculpted the grains into ripples like lake water waves or dapples when the Sirocco howled; no matter the weather condition, desert sand was forever Hot! As Heather huddled in her makeshift “fort” she couldn’t help but wonder if even the cold, heavy raindrops could cool the tortured “dragon’s breath” of the incessant, agonizing heat. A slight fog began to form in the air cooled the desert surface.

The fierce firefight which had caught her squad somewhat by surprise, partly, if not entirely, because of the inadequacy of her newly arrived novice Lieutenant, had decimated its members; six KIA including the Lieutenant, four severely wounded to the point they probably would not survive absent focused medical attention which was needed immediately. She seemed to have fared the best of the lot but had twisted an ankle in fleeing the initial onslaught of the well planned ambush. She put the minor pain out of memory, mentally running a checklist of defense.

She had “smelled” the coming rain, something she had inherited from her grandfather; he always foretold coming rain and, better, could call out a blizzard snow better than any meteorologist. Heather had inherited the knack, for whatever it might be worth.

The sergeant had warned the Lieutenant of the approaching storm, saying that they ought to “dig-in” until it passed. Overruled! He had his orders and no damn rain shower was going to thwart his completion. The onslaught of raindrops coincided with the fusillade of enemy fire emanating from both sides of the narrow valley. Ambush! Perfectly executed and decimating.

The Sergeant had suggested several times to her superior, by rank if not by pragmatic experience, that they should skirt around the escarpment outcropping saying that it was too much a natural ambush feature. The officer, overeager to prove his leadership acumen and anxious to show his superiors his value to the “cause” ignored her warnings and proceeded, with caution, into the shallow valley flanked on both sides by steep cliffs rising to about a hundred meters above the entrance. The setting sun blinded then to their enemy secluded in the waiting shadows.

“Intel shows that this trail leads to a wide valley about a half mile ahead,” The L-T spoke in an arrogant voice as he consulted a field map. “My briefing with the Captain said that we were to dig in and set up a clandestine reconnaissance line on the western slopes to surveille any nighttime truck or convoy activity moving material. That pass is the quickest direct way.”

“Yes! Sir! Lieutenant,” McGonahue had agreed, passively, so as not to appear argumentative; she wanted to get his attention in order to impress upon the naïve officer the eminent ambush danger. “This pass through the rocks is a textbook example of the ‘perfect’ ambush set-up.”

“Okay, Sergeant. I note your concern. We don’t have enough daylight to go around and still set up our surveillance cordon.” He looked her in the eye. “We go straight ahead. Is that clear?”

She had nodded acquiescence knowing it was a disastrous mistake to proceed. “Yes! Sir!”

Why in hell the “intel” spooks, she considered that they must be CIA types, couldn’t utilize drones for their surveillance of the highway crossed her mind. She reprimanded herself, again. “Damn! That’s just practical me trying to soothe my anger toward the lieutenant for not listening to me. Hell! I’d be better off if he was a ‘spook’ back in the rear.” She shook her head.

(Part 2 of 4 Tomorrow)

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